Sunday, 29 May 2011

tantrum


rip, rip
the wind picks up
rips everything apart

a bruising troth
the ocean
instigating

blasting rage on shoreline cliffs
pine splitting fury strikes the land

and i want  to see
and know
who drives this tantrum

4 comments:

  1. Nature speaks and asks us to seek its maker lol
    I like the idea that came across to me from your write :)
    Enjoy the potluck!

    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/05/28/gad-sa-w-fe-m/

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  2. beautiful description of tantrum.

    there could be many reasons for it to happen.

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  3. I love the concept of the poem nature having a tantrum. Such violent, powerful imagery

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  4. very nice. i feel the same i think. I have to see even if i am dreanched and lightening is so close my hair stands at arms

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