Saturday, 18 June 2011

Jim coming through the door

Always walking on the
tightrope

Ever on the threshold
precipice

Scaring parents and
the tennis biscuit society

Drunk
Hazed
Dazed

Lighting fires in LA
breaking through
on every stage 

O that Alexandrian
whiff of the hair

Jesus !
you were Perfect and unashamed
in every sexy flaw of your being

3 comments:

  1. Very good write to the prompt. I enjoyed it a lot. I think it could be a song too.

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  2. The first time he sang in front of a crowd, he kept his back to the audience, he was so unsure of himself. He sure got over that!I enjoyed your piece for the prompt.

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  3. haha...he was awesome! Great tribute.. :)

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