Tuesday, 26 July 2011

the Lover Cook:Trifle pudding



If my love
Should leave you alone

Repentance can be considered
By your able kitchen hands

Luring passionate feelings
Back to you

This I swear when

Serving rainbow jelly hazelnut
Pregnant with red glossy cherry

A fruit surprise and duvet covered
With a dreamy fluffy cream delight

The lovers cook giving her best

In shiny silver spoons
white china porcelain

dish up and be served
with ambrosia pudding of the gods

and my love for you will get
sweeter with each immaculate helping

6 comments:

  1. What a way to put the old adage, "a way to a man's heart is through his stomach". My goodness, I enjoyed this. Thank you!

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  2. Clever use of metaphor. Delicious, too.

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  3. Such a lovely poem. Thank you for sharing. My entry this week is http://www.gatelesspassage.com

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  4. Deliciously done!

    My offering this week: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/28/forever-changed-2/

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  5. This is such a lovely poem. I have read so many wonderful poem and so happy I have found this stie. My entry this week is http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/08/29/the-one-and-only-kiss/

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