wow, strong imagery here. the first line draws me in and the rest keep the sharp momentum going. like the brevity of it all too - really adds to the poignant effect of the whole piece.
Very powerful write!http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/18/this-christmas/
I like :) red streams throughout, metaphorically and all, quite creative :)happy gooseberry day!http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/12/19/in-the-silence/
I think the best part and all concepts are hidden in this line "The red story of our raped souls"Love this... May ALLAH protect our souls.
great take on forgiveness.