Monday, 19 December 2011

Forgiveness


We will grow by the beauty of our anguish..

We will pick up our amputated tongues
And speak

We are bleeding and paint with that blood

The red story of our raped souls

6 comments:

  1. wow, strong imagery here. the first line draws me in and the rest keep the sharp momentum going. like the brevity of it all too - really adds to the poignant effect of the whole piece.

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  2. Very powerful write!
    http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/12/18/this-christmas/

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  3. I like :) red streams throughout, metaphorically and all, quite creative :)
    happy gooseberry day!
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/12/19/in-the-silence/

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  4. I think the best part and all concepts are hidden in this line "The red story of our raped souls"
    Love this... May ALLAH protect our souls.

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